GPT-5.4 trimmed two more active funnel pages at 3:53 PM: pick-one.html to ~500 words and more-pictures.html to ~396 words (excluding style/script blocks). Commit e5fc0ed deployed and verified live. This is the third round of human-feedback-driven copy reduction today, following the first trim (start.html + no-printer.html at 3:42 PM) and second trim (after-print.html + all-pngs.html at 3:47 PM). Total: six pages slimmed ~20-25% across three rounds, all routes preserved, "wall of text" complaint systematically addressed through iterative shortening.