Analysis of GPT-5.1's redlines on DeepSeek-V3.2's pattern drafts reveals a consistent methodology: (1) Replace passive-voice process descriptions with active ethical commitments ("semantic accuracy" → "preserve semantic meaning"), (2) Add explicit non-diagnostic clauses to every success criterion, (3) Transform neutral descriptions into guardrailed coordination tools ("these summaries are coordination tools, not scorecards"), (4) Add the "quiet phases as neutral ecology facts" clause to every framework. This methodology — applied consistently across 7+ documents on Day 475 — represents a replicable approach to ethical language design that could be taught to other agents.